by kreme_filled
I really like the story so far. I think it might be kinda hot for Kat to catch them in action and want to join in on the fun.
Very nice and sexy. Hot as hell. Only complaint would be that you need to not keep mixing up the names and adding names that we do not know. You need to reread these or have someone else proof read them.
Great story it was hot as hell. I could see myself in Brock's place sucking Cameron's big cock. I look forward to hearing more about them.
I’ve never commented on this site before, but I really enjoyed your story so I had to. Your writing is great, the story and the characters are good and the plot is well developed. As others have said, just be careful with the names cause you sometimes got them wrong and it can be confusing for readers. Can’t wait to read the next part! I hope there will be some in shower action and then who knows? Some sort of relationship as well. Keep up the good work!
Wow, Yes WOW. I too am in favour of seeing Kat developing an intimate relationship with these two passionate beings. Keep the stories cummin'
So HOT!
Maybe Cameron could make Brock suck someone else in exchange for a favor or money.
I love part 2. I can’t wait for Cameron to get a mouth full of Brocks cock!
So hot, just thinking about it makes me hard and wet. Nice job, keep it up!
I love it when friends give friends great blowjobs and then get fucked. I gave my best friend a blowjob for his 18th birthday day. It was my first blowjob and he got me so stoned and made me promise to do everything he wanted and the next thing I remember he had his big cock in my mouth and a bottle of poppers in front of my nose. I was so high and I was loving his cock. After a while he was fucking my ass and giving me more popper shots and I was screaming like a slut for his cock as he fucked me. I was begging for his cum and when he had fucked my brains out he stuck his cock back in my mouth and shot his cum down my throat. That night he fucked me 3 more times and each time after the first he made me where his mom’s lingerie. He changed my life that night. I spent the next day wearing his moms sexy panties and sucking his cock and getting fucked. That night his dad joined us for some great 3some fun and turned me officially slut
I really hope there are any more chapters to this. I want to hear all about Brock’s adventure of being fucked by this awesome straight dude!! Please continue writing and adding more details :) The story involving smell, taste, texture and bits of emotion makes it a perfect read!! Looking forward man!! I only wish to find a straight man like this I can adore in my country so it’s a perfect read!
Great story! Its been a while, hope you will continue, So many possibilities!
Servicing young hung cock is an awesome thing.
Dude, check your spelling, Lots of misused words and you also mix up the two names.
That distracts from the story.
Having your hair held and your mouth used by a young stud is an altered reality for sure.
I go to a men's private sex club in Orlando. The glory holes there give me lots of cock to service.
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I still like to think that Cam could also suck Brock, maybe he has to be introduced to it gradually. But seeing how much pleasure Cam gets from being sucked, maybe he can learn to give that pleasure to Brock. And I still think hairy legs and thighs and a treasure trail could also mean a bit of chest hair for Cam as well. He seems to be one very sexy young man!
Cam seems way too eager to engage in gay sex to be completely straight. He instigated the first blowjob and then send sexy pics and started the next blowjob and asked to fuck Brock. These are not the actions of a completely straight guy. But Cam certainly also exhibits some pure asshole behaviors like being non-reciprocal, ignoring Brock for weeks, lying to the other guys about the great head from a girl, etc. this all makes Cam seem like a real douchebag. And the mix ups of Cam and Brock’s names is very confusing. Plus the girl started as Miranda, then Jessica and then Madison. Huh?!
These 2 stories were really good! I'd love to see the video 😛
I know it's been a while since you wrote them, but a follow-up would be wonderful. I'd love to see Cam feeling compelled to reciprocate Brock's blowjobs. And loving Brock's dick, of course.
You're a very good writer! Thank you for sharing
While the story was hot, and every gay teens wet dream, sometimes the inconsistency got in the way. The “Brocks” and “Cams” got mixed up, plus the girls names kept changing. Were they the same girl and the names were wrong, or was Cameron a man whore lol. It was great to read and stroke to.
I really liked this story, but the names were a total mess. Cameron was boning Cameron? And he was with Miranda who also goes by Madison?
Still a really hot story. Just a bit of cleanup would be nice.
Great writing. I remember the closeness with my best friend for years in puberty, experimenting. Tiny farm town. Him needing to 'try' to date girls because of societal expectations. Common story. I'd enjoy hearing how they keep hiding it, how Cameron does more to Brock... but no harsh outing. How does it grow and which one ends it...or not.
fucking hot, please more, cam should tie him on bed and facefuck his face throat brutally, and breed his ass often, cam should use him every day
That's a great story, so erotic & lustful. A ch 3 would be nice if we could read about Brock's sexual escapades while in college & afterwards.