All Comments on 'Broken Home Pt. 04'

I love impossible plots. Would that it were a true story. 5 & fave.

Awesome chapter. Keep up the good work.

Very lucky man. Needs to pipe down the ladies to keep them calm

I have never left a comment before, so this means something. This series was simply the best I have read on this site. The sensual and sexual and erotic writing was good, but what makes it stand out for me was the realness of the writing, especially the first three parts. The real connection between Nick and Brandon, the real depth of feeling there, the genuine sense of grief, the mixed up craziness of the grief process doe Hannah, Nick, and Deana. This is the first story here that actually brought tears to my eyes, it was that good. I fancy myself a a god writer and my own stuff brings tears to my eyes when I read it, but this is the first time that has happened when I read someone else's work here. Great job Ian Snow!

I concur with the person commenting for the first time. This story is truly exceptional! Please keep up the great work, Mr. Snow!

Was not expecting this to turn into a harem. You are good Mr. Snow! Now on to calming the ladies down and the new normal.

Cheers

SAGE

Yea. This turned into a effin f$ck fest. Got kinda boring. Who he effin now? Who cares they are all the same.

A real fuck fest. Lucky bastard. Now he gets to impregnate one woman, another wants his baby too. And what about Hannah? Does she want it too? And whom does he marry?