All Comments on 'Brooke Works at the Hardware Store Pt. 02'

by ElectricBlue

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pcman1950pcman1950over 1 year ago

Lovely use of the format. More titillation, please!

holliday1960holliday1960about 1 year ago

I agree with PCman. You made excellent use of the format. If read out of sequence, I wouldn't feel left out of the loop at all.

SamScribbleSamScribbleabout 1 year ago

Vey clever, EB. Kerr-ching!

cmj711cmj711about 1 year ago

Such a tease, better than a loyalty card ;)

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A writer of mostly urban erotica, with more café scenes than a classic French movie; occasional departures to more fantastic worlds, off planet and on.