All Comments on 'Brooke's Game'

by TwistedManc

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AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Well written. Was so hot.

liz33ndliz33nd5 months ago

i like this, i love a seduction, and this one is well written and sexy as fuck.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

two taxi's, two sofa's, two tea's.... but two cups? Why not cup's? But wait, it gets even better: " ... when she see's ..."

What's wrong with you?

PappasleazePappasleaze5 months ago

After reading most of your work here I must say that I don't think this was one of your best starts, however with that said after page one I was all in. I am sorry that Harry is out of the picture but cuckqeaning Charlotte could be very interesting especially if she ends up under Brooks control. well I am willing to see where your talent takes this story.

GrandpaGDJGrandpaGDJ5 months ago

Great story. Wanted to rate it a 5, but IOS 17.2 on my IPAD won’t allow me to rate it. â˜č

6inchStilettos6inchStilettos5 months ago

Really really hott! I hope this story continues!!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

I wish you hadn't done it all in one part.

More like the other famous sister in law one:

https://www.literotica.com/s/sister-in-law-backseat-pt-01

but you are one of the best writers for sure. You need to keep the cnc, blackmail, taboo shit coming.

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

Really hope there's a part 2 maybe even a part 3 to this one... really hot story

Chris_Knight_69Chris_Knight_695 months ago

Hope there's a part two!

MikePaulWritesMikePaulWrites5 months ago

This story begs to be continued.

Baqfid12Baqfid125 months ago

Great story! Hope you continue it!

AnonymousAnonymous5 months ago

WISH i HAD SISTER IN LAWS LIKE BROOKE. THEY'RE HOT ALSO WISH THE WIFE WOULD ENTERTAIN A 3SOME

AmbulAmbul4 months ago

Brooke got what she wanted, George’s cock, which was denied her. The busty slut is insatiable, and George is now totally sucked in. He will want to fuck her as often as possible. Charlotte has cut him off for no apparent reason, and all he gets are “pecks” on the cheek. Brooke, on the other hand has made her entire hot body available to him. Now that Harry is out of the picture, George should dump Charlotte for Brooke, remembering that she is an uninhibited slut and may not feel limited to his big cock. Love this story and I would love to see what the author will do with it in another chapter.

rockingtilidroprockingtilidrop4 months ago

This def deserves a part 2

Flipps406Flipps4064 months ago

This is really good!! Love it!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Crap stories.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 months ago

Great story

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