All Comments on 'Brother, Sister, Shared Obsessions'

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AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Reciprocal passing outs . . . Novel twist I have not read before.

Seems to have worked both ways, and you are both maintaining your revised status quo. Good one!

BunnyJunnyBunnyJunny10 months ago

With the frequency they pass out and knock their heads on the ground they definetly should go to see a doctor.

Not a storytype that rocks my boat, seems a bit hurried and almost no development / background at all, however a bit of a twist and definetly an approach that could find use in a longer, more developed storyline (not that much passing out but the general idea around it).

Keep it up and going.

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