All Comments on 'Brotherly Love Ch. 05'

I plan on going back and reading from the start but I'm really interested in her getting out and back to Mark. Maybe the brother is right about Mark or not, like I said I have to back and read but I don't think anything justifies what he just did to her, especially since she's old enough to make descisions for herself now.

Looking forward to chapter 6.

Pretty good chapter, but I think the next few chapters should have more sensuality and less melodrama. I want some more sexy touching of Mark's ass and six pack, and her perky breasts. Give us some sexy!

i can't wait for more. these chapters are getting to be really good. The next chapters should deal with her and Mark resuing her. Not too much melodrama.

Yeah, first three chapters were great, but the fourth should have been a lot slower-paced. It's as if you hit the fast foward button on it, and then mixed it with the world's craziest soap opera.

It's awsome. All of them are great, and I just decided to post on this one.

Thanks for an amazing story.

I love this chapter, just enough sensuality to keep it interesting, some fighting and the drama is excellent! I can't wait to read the next chapter!!

This chapter sucks!

What the brother does is criminal and what she does is plain stupid! Deserves no stars, whatsoever.

You seriously ask what your writing is?!!

If u guys don't like it, don't read it. Now go take ur negative comments somewhere else

The one saying this deserves no stars, do you realise how old this story is? WTF are you still reading it at the end of chapter 5 if you don't like it, grow the fuck up and find something else to read