All Comments on 'Brother's Basketball Teammate Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Wow, so invested in this story, please please do a part 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very good start, can’t wait to see where you take us. Keep going!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

DEAR LORD PLEASE CONTINUEEE

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You, good boy, should definitely continue ;)

ScrtCumSlut99ScrtCumSlut99over 2 years ago
Neeeed More!

Ready for the next chapter!!

SpiremanSpiremanover 2 years ago

It was a bit of a slow burner but that did set the scene, please continue this, I want to read more.

Goldfinch1996Goldfinch1996over 2 years ago

I really hope you'll keep posting! And it'd be super cool if they didn't get immediately to sex but it was more of a slow-ish burn (just my 2 cents)!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Amazing!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Oh my god. The build up is intense, best I've seen yet

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Keep this one going. I so want to read more.

carmelcookeecarmelcookeeover 2 years ago

I'm intrigued to read what happens next!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! waiting......

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Fantastic! Could go several different ways with this, keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

OMG PLEASE MAKE THIS HAPPEN I WAS NOT READY FOR THIS TO END RIGHT THERE

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Sexy young Joss should have a dusting of sexy chest hair for that muscular manly chest!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Any newss???

wcshieldswcshieldsover 2 years ago

Such good characters, thanks for creating them. Please continue this story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I love it that you're taking time and effort to develop the characters, but you're really teasing us with the anticipation. Can't wait to read the next chapter

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please tell me you are working on the next chapter..?.? I can’t wait to see what’s next!! Great job so far!!

GybbsGybbsover 2 years ago

Left me breathless. Can't wait to read what happens next!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

When I was 18 I had a friend like this that was the handsome with a firm body and most popular man with a beautiful girl friend. He came onto me but he kissed me with his hands all over me. I was in shock. I was not out and I had never been in a gay relationship. It was life changing I discovered the pleasure of full gay sex.

Hutchison12Hutchison12over 2 years ago

Wow.. what a start awesome

Nimitz161616Nimitz161616over 2 years ago

Can we please have more like this series? I re-read it like once a month and love it.

nygayguynygayguyabout 2 years ago

Very hot story. I need to keep reading this series!

DickbrokemyheartDickbrokemyheartover 1 year ago

Damn, this is one of the best series on this site, bravo : )

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