All Comments on 'Brother's Basketball Teammate Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Great story so far chapters 1&2 have been so well written - can’t wait for chapter 3!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I felt every word. It's amazing how relatable the emotions are. It's as if I can feel what Leo is feeling. Keep it up! Dying to know what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

You have a fantastic writing style. Please don't make us wait too long for the next chapter.

Goldfinch1996Goldfinch1996over 2 years ago

iNCREDIBLE! Cant wait for the next instalment!

GybbsGybbsover 2 years ago

If in the end Joss doesn't do right by Leo, I will be devastated. Dayum!

shutanezshutanezover 2 years ago

I love this so much! Joss is so sexy in my mind ugh. Keep it up :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

NOTHING LIKE GIVING A BUDDY AMAZING HEAD AND SWALLOWING

cumlappercumlapperover 2 years ago

Story flows great and the details of their interactions and love making a awesome. Can't wait for the next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Please make this into a true love story. Joss falls in love with Leo. Beautiful story.

hayabusa02hayabusa02over 2 years ago

Can't stop thinking about this. Update please!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I'm already so invested in this story. these 2 chapters are excellent! Hope the next ones keep up

tx75067tx75067over 2 years ago

Please tell me Joss is going to take that booty soon :). Can’t wait for chapter 3!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Need next chapter!!! Need breeding. Hot sex. I love sex with straight men as gay gives them more pleasure than what woman give them. Always hear I wish my girlfriend/wife could do what you did to me.

redhdbtmredhdbtmover 2 years ago

Out fn standing!!!!!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Very hot please do another chapter soon

DickbrokemyheartDickbrokemyheartover 1 year ago

Well.... you are a very talented writer, no doubt about it, please post more stories?!

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