All Comments on 'Brown Eyes, Blue Smile Ch. 08'

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missingmissmissingmissover 13 years ago
Oh

Bittersweet ending, ty for that story.

curioussscuriousssover 13 years ago
A sorta happy ending

but good enough for the imagination to see that it will be.

Thanks for finishing it - a lot of appropriate emotion and a bit of a roller coaster overall.

Thanks a lot.

catman71catman71over 13 years ago
more of this bunch

i do think that this group of characters has legs and could continue, how michele makes out, glorias future all of them

NightpleasureNightpleasureover 12 years ago

The whole story was touching. I cried throughout the chapters. Good read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Nice story

But considering who you are - I bestow upon you 1 shiny star.

BadHusbandMikeBadHusbandMikealmost 5 years ago
grammer

I enjoyed the story. I am not sure if most was on purpose or not. That is my only sticking point because it was very distracting for me.

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