All Comments on 'Bruises Ch. 02'

wow again. i like that deryck realises he needs Ryn. and i like the fact that she was knid enough to offer her help. they both seem like they will be very shy characters, so it will be delightful to see how they further develop in part 3. good going.

I can't wait for the third chapter. I really like the twists you're adding, like the half-brother.

An interseting cast of characters. I am awaiting the third chapter to see how this is going to play out.

I am looking forward to how you bring this all about, throwing the half brother in there will make it interesting.