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Click hereThey knew that - each about the other. And their spouses also knew that. The entire thing lent an interesting low level of tension, from time to time.
Sometimes, at parties, James and Bess would dance. When that happened, Moe would be savagely attacked by Bess after the party. And Nora would also get her reward.
Sometimes, after one of those evenings, Moe wondered just how long the high wire act could continue without a fall.
Nothing's ever certain in this life.
He eased his mind with the thought of how very beautiful Nora still was.
The end.
Fantastic story, very real and original storyline which plays out a long and believable way, but ultimately cries out for a denouement!!! Please, please, please let there be a conclusion!!!!
Until the very last you were working on a 4 or 5. But the nebulous final few lines left me pissed off due to the non-ending. Many may like that “let them figure out what happens next” ploy but I don’t; a beginning, an entertaining & interesting middle, then a definitive ending.
I didn't care for this. EVERYONE felt like they were disrespecting Moe, especially Bess. I don't know how easy it would be to come back from that. You can yell about fragile egos all you want, but at the end, your partner should have your back 100%. Bess, quite simply, doesn't. 2*
Whom the hell wants to live like that ? With the "Sword of Damocles" hanging over them ... Get rid of the bitch is the only choice. Take her to the range so she can have her "accident" , then go back home and live your life. 2 stars for leaving us hanging and Moe to suffer .
Bess is a cheat. James is a cheat. Moe might as well shoot them both, sooner rather than later.
I really dislike the story.