All Comments on 'Bubbles'

Dark and Red — loved the anonymity. So many lines ratchet the intensity of this well titled piece. “Dark squeezed her tightly, displacing every last bubble between them” — that line so perfect for the scene. And the scene so erotic/sensually charged — rather amazing how well you sustained/intensified the passion of their love making. Beautifully erotic; so well written.

Wow. Your writing was so vivid… and HOT. I could really feel myself in that tub. “The bubbles were up to her chin and softly fizzed in her ears”. And the banter between Dark and Red was great — it reinforced the closeness of these two.