All Comments on 'Buffy and the Gang Perform a Ritual'

Cleverly done. And pretty hot too.

Very, VERY clever (and sexy) story! And the final twist with Willow and Giles was great! Big Thumbs UP!

Clever, but it would have been more interesting and (cringeworthy) if Dawn got the magical penis

Hi Anon! Thanks for the feedback.

Regarding Dawn and who got the magical penis (not a sentence I expected to type today!) I knew early on when planning the story that I'd need to put one girl on the 'men's team'. I chose Willow because of her sexuality, and her existing connection to the other characters, and because she was not related to the others.

I felt it right to have a lesbian get the penis, so it would still be a girl loving a girl. It was already strange to take 1 girl who didn't like penises, and make her take 4 in a row. It would be worse if I had 2 lesbians going through that, and a straight girl (who likes penises) not be able to receive what she wants.

I chose Willow over Kennedy for the penis because the other characters have a better connection with her, making for better scenes.

Finally, i wanted to avoid the incest of Buffy and Dawn. As you may know, many of my stories already have incest, so I wanted to branch out.

But thank you for your interest! And if that's something you would like to see in a sequel story, just let me know and I can get thinking about it.

Well done on remembering so many characters. Not sure if you have them matched right but it was most impressive. You so far have made a story worth the April Fools sobriquet.

Is there some reason that you've abandoned the CHIMERA story?

Wonderful humor. I didn’t see the twist coming at the end