All Comments on 'Bull Joins the Asian Sorority'

The story is solid, don't get me wrong, but holy crap you need a proofreader so bad. You have tons of spelling errors ("horny" not "horney"), and your grammar is an atrocious mess. Also you randomly change perspectives and character names by accident (e.g. referring to Bull as Andrew, switching to first person for a paragraph). Your story is being held back by your lack of English skills, which I find ironic for someone with a white superiority fetish.

No Asian woman with half a brain would change herself for an entitled white prick, just fyi. This is literally one of the worst stories I've read here, unrealistic and just a pile of bullshit. Author, please go get an education lmao

Did a 8yr old write this crap

Pathetic trash.

I hope more white studs get to move into the house.