All Comments on 'Bully and My Wife Part Ways'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
What an ugly piece of work u r

U are one ugly pathetic freak of nature ...ur thoughts are for the gutter and u also belong there...stop writing please or hold your breath till u rid yourself of this beautiful planet...we don’t deserve shit pieces like u!

WhackdoodleWhackdoodlealmost 4 years ago
1 star and only because it’s the end.

This was a putrid excuse for a story. Don’t write.

BuckeyebobBuckeyebobalmost 4 years ago
That was incredibly

BORING

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
I'd like to second

"What an ugly piece of work u r" His comments save me the bother of typing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
What the

You still don’t understand do you. This is not a loving wife category story ! Your tile helps you place your story . As I pointed out you again have based your story on the characters and that is not how this site works . You have to base your story on what they do you have got a Bdsm/nonconsent/ group/mature category story. But because you decided to put your story in the wrong category all you are going to get is grief . I did try to explain as easily as I could but it looks like you are a hardheaded person because you don’t seam to want to know. To get anywhere advice is always helpful. But to see a review telling you to give up everything all I can say is be careful on what you write. So now all that writing you have done was for nothing. These types of stories in this loving wife category are dead at the moment they have stalled they are worthless or pointless or boring or ten a penny etc . All because the newbies just flooded the loving wife category with pointless stories when read nearly all were in the wrong category. But because there was so many people got fed up of reading the same old thing day in day out . That is why only BTB are making it big in the loving wife category. If I was you I would leave the loving wife category alone and go try different category’s and have fun doing it .

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Do not stop writing

Your work is amazing!! Ignore the limp dicks who get triggered over a story. Hope to see more adventures of Karen and maybe a spin off of her friends too

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Another SHIT day in loving wives.

Wow, can it get any worse? 1* for every one of the garbage stories posted today.

Chuckles1966Chuckles1966almost 4 years ago
Suing for GBH, eh?

So, heres your country tersuut for blackmail, citing your c)client's own communications,

And, to go with it, a nice side of attempted rape, and 2 counts of assault with GBH.

Defending someone you are assaulting is not a chargeable offense. Ai heres your motion to dismiss.

26thNC26thNCalmost 4 years ago

Now can we part ways with this ridiculous story? So he finally stood up to the bully and rescued his wife. Why would he even want the whore back?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Simply awful

Start to finish this was badly done.

1 star

Ntr2OppaiNtr2Oppaialmost 4 years ago
Loving Wives

For all the morons who complain about the Loving Wives category, you do know this category is for cuckold stories don't you? Try actually looking at the description for categories before complaining

Loving Wives - Married extra-marital fun: swinging, sharing & more. (34117)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
3 pages

full of shit. Wasn't half a page enough?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
You've done it!

You've managed to present a story that defied any literate person to craft language that conveyed adequately how bad this story is. Congratulations.

ShadowRosieShadowRosiealmost 4 years ago

I think this was supposed to be a thoughtful serious story. um.. It was pure slush from the sewers of bad memories and the entire story should have been left in that sewer. No one wants to see a story like this, even if it is fiction.

Ntr2OppaiNtr2Oppaiover 3 years ago
Re:Loving Wives

I give you the exact definition of the Loving Wives tag on this site yet you still say I'm wrong? Read motherfucker "Loving Wives - Married extra-marital fun: swinging, sharing & more." The Loving Wives tag is the cuckold tag not Fetish. Take your meds and fuck off.

Legio_Patria_NostraLegio_Patria_Nostraover 3 years ago

Great, fun, tongue-in-cheek, read!!!!

NVDiceGuyNVDiceGuyabout 3 years ago

Finally! What the fuck. Should have read this forst

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

What a cucked writer.. bio says just married and living in London! Waddya expect? Cuck capital of the world where 99 percent of males are cucks ! Are u married to a man? Must be! Enjoy ur life in frilly panties !

Boyd PercyBoyd Percyalmost 2 years ago

Nice parting of the ways!

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I think there needs to be a cuckold category because the loving wives section in the past decade + has turned into these weird as fuck fantasies clearly written by younger men who haven't really experienced parties or swining or women because the writing reeks of youth and a really fucked up mindset towards women as mean people who just abuse ppl for their own pleasure, that screams rejected person projecting their hatred of women into these stories, as a 40 year old dude whose seen weird shit, these stories are becoming just too much, like can we get back to good writing again or is all there is to literotica, angry cuck stories and stupid incest between mom and son crap

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