by creativeboyinspring
The author now has a multiverse. Interesting. Nicely crafted story. Interesting how things progressed. Ending was a bit abrupt but still wrapped up nicely. Great job
Mmmmmm, an even darker addition to the homeless camp. Yet so many of us know this submission, this needing to be treated similarly to this, to feel a sexual humiliation deeply enough, often an 'objectification', that there is a spreading, a blossoming, of deep and dark sexual energies -- within us. And fuck the consequences to experience it. - a male submissive whore takes another step down (a 'straight' one, not that gender has much to do with it.)
At first I didn't get why Jenny had to end in the homeless camp, but then I understood: she liked the humiliation, but she also liked when the girls forced and posted the interaction online. I still think that therapy and/or a proper Dom would be a better solution than live in the fringe of society without finishing school and living without proper health care, but it's a win for the homeless people in fiction (joking, I know this is fiction). Your stories are about people accepting their sexual dark desires, and although you wrote a lot of stories about it, you always gives a fresh take, but I agree with Zambonilord that the ending was abrupt. I wonder if Jenny and Yesnia are going to interact... Maybe they can help each other to find peace of mind?
This piece is great! Big fan of your work for honestly a few years now and I've never commented before, but thought this story is a good one to start commenting on.
Id love to see Yesnia and Jenny to meet up. I kept wishing throughout the story that they were gonna have Jenny eat out Yesnia. It was nice to see that Yesnia is doing good and seems to be happy. I hate that you keep adding cow kinks to your stories because then I'm really gonna have a cow kink. A+ content.
Thanks for linking this story and Wheels On The Bus. Great idea and great work.
Perhaps in chapter 3 Jenny and Yesnia can shown how they are progressing for Madam.
Thank you for this chapter. It was worth the impatient waiting. I will hope for more.
Perhaps in chapter 3 her school bullies can find the videos online of what’s happened to her and spread them around anonymously. With madam revealing what’s happened. That the videos are public and everyone in her life knows and has lost any respect for her, disowned her. Or maybe the people in the town take pleasure in her life being ruined but they don’t tell her because at this point she only views herself as a cow, she’s forgotten everything before then.
Or maybe chapter 3 fast forwards and she’s pregnant or on supplements. Somehow giving milk and her new owners are making money off that too.
I hope to see Yesnii the nerd and Jenny the cow again at some point in the future...
Although this was a good chapter It was in no way as good as the first. This one was more of a teenage boy's fantasy. If you decide a chapter three is necessary maybe have her get free and go back to some individuals bullying her, maybe neighbors or a club or something of that sort.
Humiliating and sexual bullying by Her peers is one thing and arousing, but enjoying someone being dehumanised is perverted.
I liked it, but it yanked me out of fantasy into reality. Being a sex slave in a city street is chilling and depressing. Weird, but true, at least for me. It is well written.