by Areoki
Usually author avoid the touchy feelings if sekf-relastion but great authours use it to build truly realistic worlds and chacthers
I do love this
You think it's a revenge story but I think it can be much more
Her son started to behave a little better after getting his ass kicked by Paul so if a dominant male came into his life it would be a plus but if he still acts like a prick Paul could always turn him into his bitch and him out as well seeing as he obviously jerked off to Paul fucking his mother plus not confronting Paul the next morning shows that he sees Paul as the alpha male
Maybe Paul and Claire should turn Andrew into Andrea
Love the direction this story is going in, where Paul and Claire’s relationship moves beyond a purely physical one to a more romantic one. The stage is set and I hope that in the next chapter, Claire discovers she is pregnant and has no choice but to offer herself up to Paul as his wife and slave for life. Paul seizes the opportunity to keep Claire and imposes strict rules on her like having to call him “master”, always being nude at home and not being allowed to leave home without his approval, etc. More kinks can follow such as Paul putting her in a collar and nipple clamps, and tattooing his name under her massive titties to mark her as his property. The old, fat, naughty whore should get the fate she deserves at the hands of the boy whom she so shamelessly seduced and has now been defeated and caught by.
Good start so far. Hope he knocked her up and can start being the alpha male. Hold it over Andrew's head. Make more videos with mommy and start making money online to really twist the knife in Andrew.
I really enjoyed the first two parts of the story, because they weren't over the top specifically with descriptions of their bodies and their sexual banter. Unfortunately, you went that route with the sexual banter in this last part, which was a bit disappointing. Not bad, just not as great as your others.
Absolutely love this story and can’t wait to see the happy ending! Keep up the good work!
You need to write another chapter to give it a ending you will also have to pull a rabbit out of your ass to save it