All Comments on 'Bunkbed Sex in NYC'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Nice but cut down on the!!!!!!!!

Great first story. My only comment is that once the sex gets going, the great description earlier in the story fades away into a lot of excited exclamation points and choppy quick sentences. The excitement kind of takes over the actual story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Bullshit

Lmaooooo fakkkeeee this did not actually happen youre prolly a 45 year old virgin

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