All Comments on 'Burglar'

That was an enjoyable story, well the 5 stars, Great Stuff

Good job

This was enjoyable, but it got a little repetitive. Probably would have been better if it was a little more concise. Like 4k or 5k words instead of 6k. Still, I liked it. Good job

It would have been so Cool for her to leave turn around and come back to stay. Changing her life forever forward

Nice story, could have been improved with some changes in pace and style. Little to indicate what got her off or her enjoyment which would have made it more interesting. No reaction or real interaction when she left - she should come back for more…

I liked it too. Shortish and to THE point.

Nice work!

Amazing, awesome and great.