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Kurt's face reappeared and he instantly lit up when he saw Genevieve. "Hi, Evie, my love! How are you doing?"
Evie's face glowed at his words, and she clasped her hands over her heart emotionally. "Hi." Was all she could say at first. "When will I see you again?"
"Soon baby soon." He assured her with a wink. "I just gotta take care of some nasty business here and then skip out of town for a bit." He blew her a kiss. "But we will talk again real soon I promise."
She caught his kiss and smiled bravely back at him before waving goodbye.
"Kurt sweety, can I look at Franky again?" Jen asked. Her tone was colder than frostbite.
"Sure, baby girl." The old man's wretched face reappeared as he was blubbering into his chest. "Hey! Look up at the lady you old bastard! She wants a word with you."
He slowly lifted his face to look back at her. What he saw sent him sobbing again. "Please! Oh God please!" He begged.
Jennifer's hands clenched the tablet so hard her fingers turned white. "Rot in Hell mother fucker!"
He paled and opened his mouth wide to wail at her before the screen went dark.
The End?
Thank you for your patience and I hope this revised ending has redeemed me in some of your eyes. As always I appreciate the comments—good and bad, as well as all the emails from supportive readers.
--Dys
- COMMENTS
RanDog0253 months agoI gave it 5 stars, BIG FUCKING HUGE STARS but the original was better. Like I said over and over again, some here wouldn't know a good fiction from a DMV driver manual and I still stand by that! Thanks.
muskyboyabout 1 year agoI like this one better, although Molly and her 2 kids still got off. A mental hospital was pretty lame. I did like that Chad and Jess both stayed monogamous, the first version was way too over the top with Chad's magic dick curing everybody. Thanks for this.
Papaof12about 1 year agoI enjoyed both versions. I certainly understand those that prefer the rewrite because there is truth in t(e saying that “paybacks are a bitch”. The original leaves you with the warm fuzzy feeling at the end.
JackEvansover 1 year agoFor what it's worth, I didn't really mind the original ending, but this one was way cooler.
My only complaint was no resolution/comeuppance for Chad's two older kids.
That said, this was an awesome story-- thanks!
