All Comments on 'Burned Ch. 05'

Awesome and touching. A story to enjoy with feeling of young love. I enjoyed and have read your previous chapters and look forward to more of this story. You are doing damn good in keeping the interest high. Thanks

The author has done a great job on writing this very sweet story of young lovers. It doesn't make any difference that they are cousins, you just can't help who you fall in love with sometimes. I hope to read more of the loving couple....Rich

kind of stupid he doesn't know his best friend is gay get real and if he was so jelous when joe called and said he was with her shopping that would have ended any chance of them ever getting together people do not get over it that quickly in several months or years maybe but not hours keep it realistic or put it in the fantacy area

Great story, good plot, very sexy. To the last poster, you'd be surprised how easily people can hide being gay. Two of my good friends turned out to be gay and I had no idea. Just saying, you know, before you start criticizing something you have no idea about. Bravo to the whole story, mate.

as soon as joe said he was with leah chris would have hung up and avoided and ignored her my cousin and i had a fight and we haven't seen or talk to each other in over 24 years and we live in the same town in chris's case living in the same house he would find a way to either move out or he would put a lock on his door and keep it locked at all times he would leave before anyone else was up and get home in time for bed keep it atleast sounding somewhat realistic and believable and stop rewriting human nature

way to rushed no one forgives and makes up that fast. when he woke up and she wasn't there and joe called he would have gone out and not come back until bed time. when he got back he would completely ignore and avoid her. it takes months or years to get over things like this keep it realistic and slow down.

DBRS

I'm sorry but there is no way one boy can be that stupid. I mean this guy is completely clueless about everything in his life!!!

good story

YAWN, he doesn't know his best friend is gay? get real.

Okay, now if Leah can only get over her jealousy and invite Missy to join them. It's probably not going to go that way, but it's what would make me happy to read. 5/5

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