All Comments on 'Busty Teenager'

Was this written by an illiterate 12-year-old? Truly awful writing!

God! You can't even get the subtitle right! Expierienced? WTF is that?

I couldn't make it through the first page, the dialogue was so bland n boring. If that wasnt bad enough u made Jimmy seem like he was so low on IQ he might be a retard. Due to that it made seem like she was taking advantage of a mentally challenged person, there is nothing enjoyable sexy about that. 1 star

I have tried 2 of your stories bro. Your dialog is just horrible. I might try another of your stories, but instead of trying to knock out and post content slow down and get a reasonable flow to the dialog.