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"A penny for your thoughts," she finally said.
"I was just wondering what our parents would say about this if they knew," I said. "They'd probably shit a brick." She chuckled at that.
"Truth be told, they'd probably say it was about damn time," she said. I looked at her curiously.
"What?" I asked. "You mean, they know?"
"Silly boy," she said. "The only one who didn't know how I feel about you... is you. Everyone else has known for a long time."
"You're kidding," I said.
"Nope," she answered. After cuddling with her for a while, she gave me a soft kiss. "I love you, cuz. I always have and I always will. And I'll always be here for you. Always." I looked at her for a moment, trying to digest all this. Then it hit me.
"I love you too, Buttercup," I said. We kissed one last time and finally fell asleep.
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More to come...
- COMMENTS
Rancher46almost 2 years agoGreat storyline that is well written. Can't wait to read the next chapter in this interesting tale. Well done. 5/5
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoDisappointing that he wasn't her first. Would make for a better fantasy IMO. An easy change to make.
Anonymousalmost 3 years agoyou need to proof-read, maybe clean up some. for example, you introduce Tim, then a few paragraphs later you call him Tom. not once but twice. yeah, maybe a bit nit-picky but still things like that can and does tend to bring your scores down somewhat in some of your reader's minds.
