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"What the fuck... You... You..." Ashley mumbled, stumbling on her words, a mask of utter disbelief and stabbing betrayal painted on her face, a knot of pain choking her words. Her eyes shimmered with barely contained tears but at the same time blazed with rage as she glared at each of them in turn, staring daggers at them all. "You... Oh, fuck you! Fuck all of you!"
Having yelled out her pain and frustration, Ashley bolted from the room, disappearing as rapidly as she had popped up on the scene. Her parting curse was still ringing in the trio's ears as the noise of her bedroom door slamming shut at the other end of the apartment resounded down the hall with a distinct sense of finality that fully snapped Nick, Tessa and Mia out of their stunned surprise, preventing them from lingering too long on questions about how long Ashley had been standing there, how much she had seen and how could they have been so taken with their naughty activities not to hear her coming home from class at all.
Quicker than Nick and Tessa to gather her wits and take action, Mia shook her head and groaned as she stood up and put her hands on her hips. "I guess I'd better go check on her... Shit, she looked mad as hell."
"No. I'll go," Tessa said, surprising both Nick and Mia as she disentangled herself from his embrace, rolled off the couch and stumbled to her feet. Unsteady on her legs and visibly woozy as she was after so many climaxes, Tessa had nonetheless a very resolute expression on her face while she took stock and looked around for her discarded clothes.
Sharing a quick glance, Nick and Mia were silent and doubtful as Tessa quickly put on her panties and tank top. Sitting up on the couch, Nick finally spoke: "Tess, I don't know if it's a good idea. Ashley is..."
"She's mad at me, yes," Tessa finished, looking at Nick and then at Mia, unflinching under their skeptical gazes. "Or she was mad at me, but now she's probably mad at you two as well. Anyways, she was mad because of me to begin with, and she's definitely still more mad at me than at you both combined," Tessa said tersely, letting out a sigh even as she straightened to her full, albeit diminutive, height. "This mess is all my fault. It started with me, and it's gonna end with me. Now."
As Nick looked for words, finding none, and Mia stared at her in bug-eyed wonder, Tessa took a deep breath, turned around and marched out of the living room, headed for Ashley's bedroom. Once she was gone, Nick and Mia once again looked at each other, utterly baffled by that turn of events.
"What in the actual fuck!?" Nick finally blurted out, gasping and adjusting his glasses, still unable to fully process the situation. "What should we do, Mia? I mean, Ashley is so... And Tessa is... What the fuck!"
Nodding slowly, Mia inhaled, exhaled and then plopped down on the couch beside Nick, still as naked as him but apparently a little less confused. Shrugging and crossing her arms under her huge boobs, she seemed almost calm as she spoke.
"Look, Nick... I say we just hang back and let them sort this out on their own. Tessa is right, you know: it all comes down to her, or at least Ashley seems to think so. And Tessa gets it. So yeah, let's just stay out of this while she does her thing, and we'll see what happens..." Mia sighed, shrugging again, meeting Nick's shocked, wild eyes with a knowing gaze. Her impish smirk was already peeking at the corners of her lips as she concluded: "I mean, if they really wanna go at it, who are we to stop them? Let's find out who's the alpha bitch already, am I right?"
"What?!" Nick gasped, dumbfounded by Mia's attitude but unable to provide an alternative course of action. "Should we... Maybe if..."
Whatever Nick may or may not have suggested, his words died as the sound of Tessa knocking on Ashley's door echoed from down the hall. Looking at each other, silent and filled with anticipation and curiosity and varying degrees of anxiety, Nick and Mia held their breath as they heard Ashley's door creaking open.
*****
To be continued...
- COMMENTS
Anonymous3 months agoYour sex scenes are way too long. Especially between the same characters, like Tess and Nick. It gets so boring I've started skipping all the sex scenes. You posted four quite long chapters, but barely moved the story along.
Also for Nick to have sex all over a shared apartment is particularly callous, disrespectful and uncaring towards his flatmate, especially considering her feelings about Nick, which he knows about. It's especially jarring considering you painted Nick as kind, sensitive and caring, where this behavior is anything but.
The bottom line is, if you spent just as much effort on characters and plot as you did on all the sex you'd have a pretty good series. Unfortunately, you didn't, so after a promising start the series drowned in endless buttsex.
Mangar6 months agoOn the one hand, this series is great, but on the other hand, it quickly becomes boring. For one thing, the explicit descriptions of ass fucking are hot, but way too long-winded. Besides, I don't want to hear Nick fucking Tessa in the ass for the umpteenth time. It would be much more interesting if, for example, B. Tessa or Ashley, after doing a DP with a dildo, wants to have it with real cocks. Tessa, Mia and Ashley have a big anal gangbang in the swingers club. But like this, extremely boring.
Anonymous7 months agoI have to agree with this comment " I enjoyed this series, except for the part where you leave it hanging. Maybe spend a little less time on the mind numbing repetition of explicitly detailing every anal encounter. I get that butt stuff is your thing, but I found myself skipping over multiple pages of explicit detail that gets regurgitated ad nauseum, just to find the tidbits of story and character evolution. Sadly, in this series there is no significant evolution and story development is excruciating slow. Repetitive butt scenes get old pretty quickly"
I also have to say that the characters personality traits and closeness established before the return of the old GF didn't work with the behaviors afterwards, Nick being so disrespectful and disregarding of Ashly in particular but also of Mia in regards to totally kicking them to the curb so to speak without any thought to a conversation after the first night with Tess ... based on the buildup of Nick's personality, that was utterly rediculous
Now here we are and I feel like I wasted my time reading this because you wrote yourself into a knot and can't seem to write your way out of it ... bear down on it dude FINISH THE JOB!
resolve the plot twists and write a " story " that isn't predominantly predicated on the baser oft repeated details of anal couplings ad nauseum
I think you have the capability to write both a resolution as well as a deeper emotional and character driven plot to wrap this up ... Don't leave your readers feeling like they wasted their time ... which I seriously do
Anonymousover 1 year agoAny chance of continuing this one? You ended it quite a while ago with a "To be continued" but then started other multi-chapter stories instead.
