All Comments on 'Button, Button'

by ShelbyDawn57

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Anthony1965Anthony1965about 2 years ago

I could use this box.

CaseyjoCaseyjoabout 2 years ago

Way too short! That is my only complaint. Absolutely fantastic as always.

dnsontndnsontnabout 2 years ago

Wild and wonderful. Wonder full. Wonder filled. Pat the ultimate androgynous name, thank you SNL. Great great short story

SabrinaGLangtonSabrinaGLangtonabout 2 years ago

Loved it, it was perfect. The ending was perfect too. I could imagine I read this in 'Dangerous Visions.' Ha, loved the line about those damn timeshare salesmen...

DeLord12804DeLord12804about 2 years ago

Very clever and nicely done.

SBC97281SBC97281about 2 years ago

Fun Fun and Quick.

SuddenlyMaddieSuddenlyMaddiealmost 2 years ago

I would love to hear about Patricia's adjustments to her new life. Thank you for the story. ❤️

CD_BreeCD_Breeover 1 year ago

This should be carried further. It was a great story.... morr adventures of pat please?

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Beautiful

FranziskaSissyFranziskaSissyover 1 year ago

Thats may a bit disturbing waking and searching some relevant to start a toilet job, smile

carlykissescarlykissesover 1 year ago

A little crazy and I never expected it.....but I loved this story. Thanks!

JackiemichelleJackiemichelleabout 1 year ago

Love your stories. I need to push that button. Hopefully you continue the story. Share your thoughts where it goes

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Authors Notes: Lots going on right now. Wanted to give everyone a big heads up. The authors got together and challenged each other to write stories in exactly 750 words. Never one to back down from a fight, I wrote and submitted six. They span several categories; 2 Sci-Fi/Fa...

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