by rgraham666
That is a shame!
A great story, well written and as entertaining today as it would have been 12½ years ago.
I had a lover once tell me of one of these devices... I am sending him this link to your story since he is not a member of LIT... very very HOT
and I loved it! I think I need a new phone! Good job...
You're right, not as good as some of your other works, but you portray the feeling of it beautifully. Well done. Nine is it?
Having been the victim of a lover with a remote on more than one occasion, you did a very good job catching the feelings. It's a wild ride and you painted it very well, while keeping the flow andmaking the story hot. Well done :)
-Colly
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmm................... I want one of those! ;)
Very nice work. You've focused in on one of the most important and yet most neglected sides of sex: the anticipation. Teresa's not knowing when her next Bzzzt! would come gave the story a marvelous, sweet tension.
Loved the story. My wife would have given out at 2:30 break. If she made it past lunch.
I think every wife should own one of those cell phones. A great anticipation story. Thank you for your time and effort in this great story.
Totally hot and such a creative twist, I need to get one of those phones for someone I know...LOL.
Wonderful job babe.
story, and a nice balance between the sexy buildup and the prosaic workday.
found myself clenching along with Teresa. BTW, where can i get a phone just like that one?!
Kudos, handsome!
A fine job of writing, just the right length (which is important they say) and a wide vocabulary. Plus a feel for the main character's emotions.
I've given it top marks for those reasons and because you obviously took a lot of time over it and put in alot of effort. Oh yes, and it got me hard, which is always a bonus.
Oh wow!!! Made the mistake of reading this whilst at work and now find myself needing those extra panties.......
You certainly know how to reach 'that' spot.
Lovely story that has everything.....Lust, romance & hard sex. Brilliant