All Comments on 'By His Reputation Ch. 07'

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Anonymousalmost 5 years ago

4/5

Honestly, this seemed a bit of fluff. Wasn't bad, but could've had more substance.

Anonymousover 3 years ago

Finally got to a bit of punishment

Well, kind of punishment. Yes, she broke a rule but the punishment was fun for both of them. Kind of missed the mark for a BDSM category but the story is still fun and hot. Would have been exciting the first time he took her ass. What kind of preparations did they take? What were their thoughts as he took her? Where did it happen: public or private? Five months and they were in a different apartment. Feels a bit rushed to the end but the love that they feel needs to be fulfilled in some form.

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