All Comments on 'By the Bay Ch. 10'

I love this story. Dont keep us waiting to long for chapter 11. Hopefully Elena will get her guy. I love the new characters too. Wonderful job.

it's been too long for #10, please do the best you can for the rest. Beautiful story.

This is such a beautiful story!

Please don't make us wait too long!

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Can't wait to see how Jay's mother reacts to Anita and Meera being in England. I'm glad to see you've developed Meera into a more rounded and likable person. Sad though that it's taken Anita being publicly humiliated for this side of her personality to shine through.

This is one of the best stories on this site. I love how I am able to relate to your characters and the depth that you have given the story. I can't wait until you update again. I know that Anita is going to have a rough time in England but I hope that they overcome and be together. And I hope Jay realizes that he loves her before it is too late. Excellent chapter!!

I have been waiting to see how Jay deals with the servant who spread such gossip about his private life to the masses. Where is the confrontation? Please, write one in before they leave.

I DO THINK REA AND JAY AND THE GIRLS ARE GOING TO ROCK STODGIE OLD ENGLAND AND THAT ELANA IS GOING TO DO SO TOO, PLEASE POST SOONEST

for her that she is grabbing her happiness and running in the wind with it. I hope that she finds acceptance in England, if not Jay will be there for her as will Meera-who is waiting for Rae that's Jays' sister.