All Comments on 'Cala's Story - Origins Pt. 01'

I love it and do so hope you continue the story

As a gay sissy faggot, I loved this, my panties are very wet now!

Excellent work as always... I only wish I could take part, would love to be one of Dan's sissy gf's

great story dan went sissy so quickly i hope Cla invites some sissys over to spit roast dan while she enjoys jer coworkes nice big cocks!!!!

Mmmm sounds great Petey. Would you like to fuck me or Dan? Either way you can wear my pink panties. Love Carla xx

Oh anytime Sissy Wannabe. I've got some new stockings & panties for you and Dan to wear. Black vintage ruffled panties & pink nylon stockings. You'll both look gorgeous in them. Love Carla xx

Oh Chloe...Do you need Dan or I to suck your little sissy cock while you wear my pink panties? Love Carla xx

Oh Sissy Jolie...maybe next time you can join in, but only if you wear my new nlack satin and lace high waisted panties with the words "spank me" written on the rear! Love Carla xx

Thank you Mistress Carla, anytime you need an extra sissy to play with please don’t hesitate would love to join you too 💋😘

i reread the story Candyboi i would love to wear sexy panties & more & suck both of you to me oral is the best sex!!!! and t=your storkies are amazing!

would love to hear whar happens when Katy & dave come over

I am loving all of your stories and I would love to be one of your sissy for you and your husband to play and dress me as you please!!!

Your story lines are sensual and erotic. I've read 7 of them now.

There are two issues. Excessively long sentences with excessive use of the word 'and'.

'And' is an inclusive word. 'And' allows inclusion of two closely related subjects into one sentence (or thought.)

Use of 'and' once in a sentence is perfectly fine. It is quite normal.

Use of 'and' more than twice in a sentence intruduces a 'ramble' of thoughts.

Your Sissy Hubby is so lucky to get to suck all that yummy CUM out of your scrumptious Pussy..I bet my Sissy Clit would even get hard if I was sucking the goo out of your TWAT!!!

Oh I bet you'd love that Claudia69?!!! But only if you promise to wear my pink ruffled panties while Dan fucks your sissy ass. Signed: Hot Wife Carla XXXXX

I liked the story, gave it a 4. why not a 5, simple, too much too fast, non-stop, that's not real in my life. It's a good story, but give the reader some time to digest, and appreciate the situation you presented. Thanks for the story.