All Comments on 'Caleb 08 - Moving In'

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golasgilgolasgilabout 1 year ago

"Now go brush your teeth!" Love it!

Tx_Emt53Tx_Emt5312 months ago

And just think, days ago they were all virgins.

Lolilol47Lolilol479 months ago

Thank you for the chapter! I really appreciate the story and the work you put behind it! (coming from storiesonline where we cannot write a comment per chapter but only at the end...)

Smartest1Smartest15 months ago

Only 4/5 this time. Am reading the whole story again, since there isn't enough progress, and I must admit to be, again, miffed with the continuing wimping by our protagonist.

Anomandaris2Anomandaris228 days ago

The "Go brush your teeth" at the end took this from 4 to 5 for me. Perfect little touch.

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