by PastMaster
Thank you for the chapter! I really appreciate the story and the work you put behind it! (coming from storiesonline where we cannot write a comment per chapter but only at the end...)
Only 4/5 this time. Am reading the whole story again, since there isn't enough progress, and I must admit to be, again, miffed with the continuing wimping by our protagonist.
The "Go brush your teeth" at the end took this from 4 to 5 for me. Perfect little touch.