All Comments on 'Caleb 29 - Consultancy'

The only thing you got right about "Waco" was "ATF are going mental and want to rush the compound." That whole section read like a fever dream of a FBI sycophant. It pulled me out of the story and made it difficult to enjoy the rest of it.

Very, very, very well written... if it's any consolation, you're one of two authors on Lit that I've bookmarked.

I like the premise, plot and flow of the story and my OCD proofreading hasn't found anything of note to comment on.

Keep up the great work - I'm hooked.

Perfect! More please.

It’s nice to know that I can come here and get immersed in this story and it is always a good time. This has been so far, one of the best thought out and written stories I have ever had the pleasure to devour. I always feel better after reading a chapter or even going back to reread something that I might have breezed by without realizing that it would play a role in a chapter at a later date. Thanks again for constantly putting so much time and effort to come up with something so high quality with incredible characters who are put into such unusual circumstances and having such incredible powers to try and get themselves and/or others out of some dire situations.

Great story. Have enjoyed reading every chapter Hope you have many chapters left to come

Thank you for the great work!

Great chapter, really enjoyed the action and variety.