by PastMaster
Always a great plot...I hope this never ends. Characters are well developed and believable. Being able to identify and feel them. Makes it great
Love your writing style. So many threads going on. Can't wait to see them all develop. Thank you.
Thank you, PM! What an interesting tale. It's always a please to see another "Caleb" chapter.
FWIW: I do read the Author's Notes. How many brownie points did I earn?
I've read all 35 installments. The story line is well written and works well with of without the sex. The topic line of power users is well thought out, and the flow of event natural. Consider putting the collection out as an e-book or softcover, or both.
Looking forward to the next installments!
I followed this on another site, and really enjoy it, I could not wait to read the next chapter, I was very frustrated when I found the other site do not have it anymore, and extremally happy that I found it here!!! Please don't stop writing the story. I like how all the different kind of ethics of different situations is handled, and i love the characters. Makes me want to be Caleb :D
Enjoying the tale..want my brownie points!
I fine this well written and intriguing. Looking forward to the rest of the story.
Nitwit, blubber, oddments?, tweak.
Have I got them right?
Well, I sometimes read the 'authors note'. But mostly I skip them, because I have an irrationally big fear of being spoilered. Since I assume that I don't share that fear with many others, I guess most of the folk here read your messages.
Aside from that: Thanks for this great story!
I would love to read a non erotic novel from you, or one with fewer/shorter sex scenes.