All Comments on 'Caleb 35 - Maharishi Guptal Pah'

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golasgilgolasgilabout 1 year ago

This is my go to, must read storyline. Thank you

oldmanbill69oldmanbill69about 1 year ago

Please keep them coming!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Thank you for my daily dose of this most enjoyable story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Always a great plot...I hope this never ends. Characters are well developed and believable. Being able to identify and feel them. Makes it great

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I love reading these stories - can’t wait for the next one - no pressure 😀

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Great, great story line!

ballybuckleboballybuckleboabout 1 year ago

Love your writing style. So many threads going on. Can't wait to see them all develop. Thank you.

MormonJackMormonJackabout 1 year ago

Thank you, PM! What an interesting tale. It's always a please to see another "Caleb" chapter.

FWIW: I do read the Author's Notes. How many brownie points did I earn?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

This gets more interesting with each chapter. Keep writing

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

I've read all 35 installments. The story line is well written and works well with of without the sex. The topic line of power users is well thought out, and the flow of event natural. Consider putting the collection out as an e-book or softcover, or both.

Looking forward to the next installments!

TheMaxx_013TheMaxx_013about 1 year ago

I followed this on another site, and really enjoy it, I could not wait to read the next chapter, I was very frustrated when I found the other site do not have it anymore, and extremally happy that I found it here!!! Please don't stop writing the story. I like how all the different kind of ethics of different situations is handled, and i love the characters. Makes me want to be Caleb :D

expwogexpwogabout 1 year ago

Keeps getting better! Thank you!

Tx_Emt53Tx_Emt5312 months ago

Jules is such a deep character. I enjoy her immensely.

Lolilol47Lolilol479 months ago

Very nice story, keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymous6 months ago

Enjoying the tale..want my brownie points!

I fine this well written and intriguing. Looking forward to the rest of the story.

SkrattiSkratti3 months ago

Nitwit, blubber, oddments?, tweak.

Have I got them right?

Well, I sometimes read the 'authors note'. But mostly I skip them, because I have an irrationally big fear of being spoilered. Since I assume that I don't share that fear with many others, I guess most of the folk here read your messages.

Aside from that: Thanks for this great story!

I would love to read a non erotic novel from you, or one with fewer/shorter sex scenes.

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