All Comments on 'Caleb 36 - Truth and Lies'

Wow interesting take on the superhero thing almost felt like a “ big bang theory” episode, thought you would use Jules technical savvy as a superhero example, as she accepted to help. Glad Dana is about to be “uncovered” and Possibly become a new member of the family…

like the story very much, hope it maintains direction.

Thank you for continuing the series. I was reading it on another site when it disappeared. I was disappointed since I have read the entire series twice. I did some searching until I found it here.

Excellent story. Binged read it over a few days -- couldn't put it down. Thank You.

I knew her secret would come out but that had to have been the worst possible way to happen for poor Dana although she will be better for it in the long run. I really get into the way Jeevan and Caleb work together and it was great to see that both Jeevan and Meena are doing so much better now. No matter how messed up or difficult things tend to be, everything has been working out very well for those concerned. I do have a serious issue with Louise’s parents having set her up to be raped because that is unforgivable in my mind. If she wasn’t so sexually kinky, she would have some serious emotional damage that could destroy her or her future. I would be thrilled to have that issue addressed with her parents so they can see what they have done since they got off too easy.

J.D.

I have never commented to a write here before but wanted to say that I think this is really wonderful writing. I truly look forward to each chapter and have re-read the series while waiting for the next one. Very interesting characters and story.

Another great chapter…!

Still loving it

This entire series has me in rapt attention. The tightly woven storylines are masterful in their simultaneous simplicity and complexity, the characters so rich and the narrative so clear I can see all of the scenes in my mind. It is truly a work of art. Bravo!

Really enjoying the series. A LOT going on this chapter. Really like the healing and the connections between the characters.

Keeps getting better and better! Thank you!

So does Caleb quickly pull Dana into an time-slowed illusion and they regroup and pretend it didn't happen, or just out with it and pour on the love?

I have been wondering if he could train his compulsion by proxy with Ness, making cows walk around in a circle or something (people would probably notice the "riverdance" herd!)

Anyway, love the story, I hope you keep writing!

Amazing how you keep it going! Loving it!!

The story is great really enjoy the character development. Would like to see some more consulting with the FBI again.

Very nice chapter, keep up the good work!