All Comments on 'Caleb 55 - Stolen Baby'

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MormonJackMormonJack11 months ago

Hmmm, so is Melanie going to be Caleb's foil?

Love the story, thank you!

Patoche95Patoche9511 months ago

J'adore toujours autant cette histoire et j'ais vraiment hâte de savoir comment vas se passer la rencontre avec leur père.

Mélanie vas devenir l'élève de Caled ? et peut être plus.

Ca vas devenir encore plus intéressent. Vivement la suite.

OhioTeddyBearOhioTeddyBear11 months ago

Just when I think there couldn't be any big plot twists coming, you manage to come up with a doozy!! Well done PM, well done. I don't where the story will continue to go, but every chapter gets better and the writing that supports it continues to grow and mature. I predict that you could become a best selling author if you would choose to do so. I only wish I had half of the writing talent you demonstrate in this series. PLEASE keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Dude! You have covered a lot in this series but first damn time you made me cry!

Screw the erotic side (pun intended), your stories do not need them.

You are a credit to your craft. Keep weaving.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Thanks for the next chapter, still lovin it. Keep them coming please !!

Fritz_WFritz_W11 months ago

Thank you for this story series and for that new turn with the new family member. I am not a native English speaker but I never read a better serie like this. To short the time for this installation I read the whole package a second time. And I enjoyed it like the first time. Thank you again for this excellent plot and written.

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eodeoeodeo11 months ago

Just keeps getting better and better.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Wow the plot lines keep expanding in this story. Keep it coming as this is my favourite story on this site.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Another fantastic twist, keep us hanging ont o find out what happens next :)

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

New twist in the story line.

Awesome!

Chapter 55 already.

Awesome!

The grand story is not getting stale or boring at all.

Awesome!

This is really awesome!

Tyrion90Tyrion9011 months ago

Lovely chapter. I was terribly disappointed to reach the end and notice there wasn't another page (or 10) to read today.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Always, always the best!!! Keep them coming…..

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

This is a great story, and you are a great story teller. I find myself scanning the new stories daily. It always makes my day brighter when I see a new Caleb! Keep em coming!

expwogexpwog11 months ago

Better and better, loving it. Thank you!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Wow..huge plot twist. Never ending excitement conpkete surprise. A master piece..thank you PM I truly love this series. I can't wait to read the next story..the father daughter meeting and the healing

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Another time when you get 5 stars when you deserve 10... interesting twist and I'm sure you'll come up with more. Thanks

DiagonalmanDiagonalman11 months ago

Love the detailed approach for the non-Power related issues. Another great episode.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Excellent! I love the plot twists! You're an amazing writer. As others have, I check daily for another chapter. I'm glad this had 4 pages instead of 3 like the past several chapters, it was appreciated. Please don't take so long to post the next one!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Beautiful story, wound together intricately. Incredibly neat and a pleasure to read

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I have been loving this story ever since I started reading it. I cannot wait for the next page to come out. So until then I will keep checking here every day for it.

WorldofgreyWorldofgrey11 months ago

Another great chapter! Am already waiting on the next chapter. Love that you checked with Gulfstream and even better that they replied!!

oldmanbill69oldmanbill6911 months ago

What a twist! Can not wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

I've read this story from the start at least four times, so far. It is better each time I read it. I've made a few 'sloppy' suggestions as to what I thought might be coming up in future chapters, and got very nicely 'slapped' across the back of the head as I read on. I won't do that any further. I will just sit back and follow along as Caleb grows and keep trying to make my writing pen stand on it's tip (almost there!!!) This story is great. Keep it going, please.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Wow.

georgemor3georgemor311 months ago

great chapter. thank you

1crazycoe1crazycoe11 months ago

just another outstanding chapter. I can't wait for more.

CoyoteHowardCoyoteHoward11 months ago

Love this, even though it was a bit heartbreaking to hit the end of the chapter.

5 stars.

gigilemrogigilemro11 months ago

Thx!

I love this saga!

Tx_Emt53Tx_Emt5311 months ago

Fuck, why do you leave me starving for more?!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

A well written Story. Gripping. Waiting for next chapter.

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

This has been such a good story that I have purchased the first 3 books!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

Wow, what an epic introduction of a new character into this already amazing story! Please keep 'em chapters coming!

AnonymousAnonymous11 months ago

What a terrific series, I have enjoyed every chapter and hope you continue the story.

JohnSimmsJohnSimms11 months ago

New characters! New story threads! Thank you so much for writing and sharing.

Lolilol47Lolilol479 months ago

Wow, threw me for a loop! Great chapter

strider__strider__9 months ago

Bravo Zulu. Great writing and believable situations. Thank you

AgridionAgridion8 months ago

Loving the story. Keep it up!

jhmastacooljhmastacool6 months ago

...and the "Previous Part" link here leads to "Caleb 53..." instead of "Caleb 54...". :)

AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

I have truly enjoyed reading this series!

I have re read it a couple times while waiting for the next chapter

An amazing read!

Draws me in and keeps me intrigued

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