by PastMaster
again a great chapter and i hope next chapter is almost finished, can't wait to read more.
Again, read on another site, but nice that Lit is at least keeping up now. This is the sweetest good feeling chapter. It tugs the heartstrings.
It makes my day when I see a new installment posted! It just keeps getting better! Thank you so much, you’re a very talented writer, I love how imaginative you are! Please keep it up!
Fantastic! Always look forward to your next chapter. Always sad when I don't find a Caleb chapter for the day. Thank you so much for sharing!
So happy to see a new chapter PM.
This one ended quite abruptly though. Just food for thought.
Looking forward to the next.
thank you so much for sharing your story with us. as always great chapter. i cant wait for the next one.
I have a compulsion to give you 10 stars but only 5 are available (just kidding). Another great chapter, keep 'em coming.
Very very good.. so much sincerity. It feels like your living the life. These step sibs create a whole new story branch and potential working team. As always PM your the best. It's the high light of my day to find a new chapter here. Love you PM
Still going strong, probably should have combined the bro/sis first meeting to avoid the duplicated stories. Only made it longer saying the same thing.
Another great chapter, thanks. I wish this was the last time we heard about that bad neighbour. I thought the 'neighbors' will be the voyeurs and I was excited about that. Great intro of the step siblings. It'd be interesting if Connie has powers too (mind reading? she knew Caleb thought E is a jock).
I enjoy Literotica but you are the only author that I check in for, on a very regular basis.
Caleb is a great character. Your writing is elegant intelligent and eloquent.
If you toned down the sex aspect you might even have a Harry Potter character or better as Caleb is an adult.
PLEASE keep on writing Caleb’s story.
Thank you for the obvious effort you put into each chapter.
Toujours aussi bien. C'est vraiment un réel plaisir de découvrir qu'il y a un nouveau chapitre à lire.
I have never laughed and never, I should say rarely cried before reading a story before but this story has had me cying at times like a child and most ly out of joy and gratitude. You have a way with words my friend, that very few have. It is a rare gift that you have blessed us with. I could read about Caleb forever! I don't say I agree with you about everything, I don't like your view of sexality, or that I agree with trans. but that is not what this is about. I love your story and it has help me become more tolerent, understaanding, patient, and careing. Isn't that what this is about? Your next story has on hell of a cliff hanger ending? Can't wait for the next two stories!