by PastMaster
I love your writing, but your damn cliffhangers... arrgghh! You are definitely in my top authors list. Thank you for sharing this amazing tale.
Super, vraiment. L'écriture est bonne et l'histoire est très intéressante. 5 étoiles (très mérité)
It looks like the crooked lawyer found out that Greenwood ratted him out using his connections. Perhaps it was the even more dangerous clients that did it. This will take some more investigating. The FBI could be taking down some crime rings with Caleb’s help.
I think PM is loosing his grip on the story...
In the beginning it was Caleb coping with his Powers, still trying to be the Knight in Shining Armor, but now it's Batman and his Robins flying under the radar...
Oh the cliff hangers, you're killing me here but I LOVE THEM... keep the stories coming, I love the writing style.
Ah man this story is brilliant, it could be a series of movies. Bring it out as a collection of books. Can't wait till next one.....
Wow, what a chapter!
I thought Caleb actually beat up that Purcell guy, and was thinking how he will "don't get caught". Glad that it was just an illusion.
I think Greenwood got dead because of an unrelated reason, and there will be some FBI action again. Looking forward to it!
I like the consistency of the characters, and their realistic actions, and the cliffhangers sound more like motivation for the writer to continue the story.
I don't even mind the lack of sex, I always just skimmed through those anyway.
Oh wow. Now that's a cliff hanger.. .... love it PM. YOU ARE A TRUE BARD AND STORY SPINNER. Magical. How's the new job? Best wishes PM
The suspense keeps on building in this long but enjoyable story. Sometimes I wonder how you chose this catagory. Looking forward to the next installment
I check on here everyday for a new addition to this story. I am engrossed. Very enjoyable read even without sex. Keep it coming. Can’t wait to see what happens next
Another cliffhanger.... but what else would expect? I, along with many others, will be waiting with bated breath to see how this is resolved.
Thank you for sharing your work. This has been an epic read. Gave the 5 stars on each chapter as I read though it. Time to comment and just let you know the work is really appreciated. Looking for more chapters. Best to you and your editors.
So who in the IRS reported to Knight. And who knows that Knight also sent a letter ? I can’t wait until the next thrill packed chapter. Well done PM. Hope the new job is everything you want it to be
Love it! Glad to see you continuing with the series and I'll be sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter.
Well, I definitely didn't see THAT coming!! Now, like the rest of your fans, I have to wait to see how you weave the next chapter of this incredible saga. Keep 'em coming PM, you're just too good to stop.
Ain’t that a kick in the head. Couldn’t happen to a nicer guy. My only hope was that it was drawn out and incredibly agonizingly complicated and painful, like finding him scattered in chunks and his moron spoiled pig of a son had to watch as his future got flushed down the toilet. BTW that’s your swirly HA!
I know, not harsh enough but then I was just spitballing.
I think Ness needs to needs to have a food final. 3 words... Lamb Tika Moussaka
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