All Comments on 'Caleb 66 - Revenge'

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TwistedDaveAuthorTwistedDaveAuthor8 months ago

I love your writing, but your damn cliffhangers... arrgghh! You are definitely in my top authors list. Thank you for sharing this amazing tale.

Patoche95Patoche958 months ago

Super, vraiment. L'écriture est bonne et l'histoire est très intéressante. 5 étoiles (très mérité)

AardieAardie8 months ago

It looks like the crooked lawyer found out that Greenwood ratted him out using his connections. Perhaps it was the even more dangerous clients that did it. This will take some more investigating. The FBI could be taking down some crime rings with Caleb’s help.

starbanestarbane8 months ago

Darn, another cliffhanger!! Great chapter. Thank you again for sharing!

vardicdvardicd8 months ago

These cliff-hangar endings will be the death of me.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I think PM is loosing his grip on the story...

In the beginning it was Caleb coping with his Powers, still trying to be the Knight in Shining Armor, but now it's Batman and his Robins flying under the radar...

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Oh the cliff hangers, you're killing me here but I LOVE THEM... keep the stories coming, I love the writing style.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

allways love tour story not all sex but life as well thank you

eodeoeodeo8 months ago

Great work as always, thanks for keeping this going!

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Ah man this story is brilliant, it could be a series of movies. Bring it out as a collection of books. Can't wait till next one.....

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Wow, what a chapter!

I thought Caleb actually beat up that Purcell guy, and was thinking how he will "don't get caught". Glad that it was just an illusion.

I think Greenwood got dead because of an unrelated reason, and there will be some FBI action again. Looking forward to it!

I like the consistency of the characters, and their realistic actions, and the cliffhangers sound more like motivation for the writer to continue the story.

I don't even mind the lack of sex, I always just skimmed through those anyway.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Oh wow. Now that's a cliff hanger.. .... love it PM. YOU ARE A TRUE BARD AND STORY SPINNER. Magical. How's the new job? Best wishes PM

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

The suspense keeps on building in this long but enjoyable story. Sometimes I wonder how you chose this catagory. Looking forward to the next installment

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Ah, what a shame. /Seinfeld

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

I check on here everyday for a new addition to this story. I am engrossed. Very enjoyable read even without sex. Keep it coming. Can’t wait to see what happens next

Rhino77PIlotRhino77PIlot8 months ago

Another cliffhanger.... but what else would expect? I, along with many others, will be waiting with bated breath to see how this is resolved.

LotOfReadingLotOfReading8 months ago

Thank you for sharing your work. This has been an epic read. Gave the 5 stars on each chapter as I read though it. Time to comment and just let you know the work is really appreciated. Looking for more chapters. Best to you and your editors.

alanawebndataalanawebndata8 months ago

So who in the IRS reported to Knight. And who knows that Knight also sent a letter ? I can’t wait until the next thrill packed chapter. Well done PM. Hope the new job is everything you want it to be

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

to long between chapters but love the whole story

SexySenior56SexySenior568 months ago

Love it! Glad to see you continuing with the series and I'll be sitting on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter.

OhioTeddyBearOhioTeddyBear8 months ago

Well, I definitely didn't see THAT coming!! Now, like the rest of your fans, I have to wait to see how you weave the next chapter of this incredible saga. Keep 'em coming PM, you're just too good to stop.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

Ain’t that a kick in the head. Couldn’t happen to a nicer guy. My only hope was that it was drawn out and incredibly agonizingly complicated and painful, like finding him scattered in chunks and his moron spoiled pig of a son had to watch as his future got flushed down the toilet. BTW that’s your swirly HA!

I know, not harsh enough but then I was just spitballing.

AnonymousAnonymous8 months ago

ThnXs again !

gigilemrogigilemro8 months ago

Multumesc mult pentru aceasta minunata poveste!

Thx!!!

AriktheRed13AriktheRed138 months ago

Absolutely Love how this Story is going. Please keep up the Great Writing.

Saturngolf96Saturngolf968 months ago

I have read entire series in about a week. Fantastic, can’t wait for more.

TriodeNPNTriodeNPN8 months ago

I think Ness needs to needs to have a food final. 3 words... Lamb Tika Moussaka

<mic drop>

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

Thanks!

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