All Comments on 'Caleb 74 - Checking Out'

Great read again. I really enjoy this modern saga of super heroes!

love your approach to powers anr the story is great i cant wait for each new chapter. this was a long time between but worth the wait just hope the next chapter is quicker

Very good chapter. I am looking forward for more action ( FBI, Crime, wild power users). Not that I‘m bored but in the last chapters it was more family stuff, interesting and entertaining but a little more thrill would be super good 😉. Please go on with this extraordinary storie 🙏🏼🖖🏼

loved it looking forward to the next chapter

I got so used to the every Sunday/ Monday publishing date. Making us wait extra days just to increase the dramatic tension hey? :)

Great as always. I hope this never ends.

This next part should be a new set to the series. New area with new neighbors. Sound like fun..can't wait to see what happens. Thank PM

Such an easy, comfortable read. Like catching up with old friends.

Great penmanship/ tapmanship

In the discussion of ethics and the internet, the other element that has arisen is the universality of the internet. Something that is perfectly acceptable in one culture but regulated in another now is accessible to all (save national censorship and even that is questionable). A very thought provoking discussion and something currently being debated at many levels…unfortunately only by those who feel they have a vested interest in the topic.

Great story keep it going please!!!

I can see issues arising from the musicians "overpayment ". Specifically, that Caleb influenced him to access a higher payout causing ethical problems with his prospective employment with the FBI

It's still really well written and enjoyable, but it has just become the Sarah and Arnie show now, and before that it had focused all on Melanie, none of the other girls barely get a look in any more.

We haven't heard anything about Jules and Ness' new power developing, and Mary and Amanda, or Josh and Louise, have barely had anything to do with the story for ages.

It just seems as if all the new characters have been developed at the cost of all the well known, and well established, ones.

Thank you! always a delightful morsel. Feels like you're arranging for larger things to come down the river.

One short note - first time you name the FBI agent you spell his last name with an "e" at the end - must have had Sir Arthur on your mind. Your editing is typically impeccable, so figured you'd want to know.

I think that this is one of the best series I have ever read in my 70+ years of reading. The wordsmithing is excellent as always, and the plot lines are interesting and convoluted enough to maintain that interest. Well done, Sir PastMaster.

I just spent 4hours reading the last few chapters and its just a dude going about his life and I did enjoy it a lot.

Some great writing right there

Really enjoy this story.

I've read each chapter with great appreciation.

A question about a plot point, though: Surely the hospital expects Arnie to come back in to have the wiring removed from his jaw. Are we to assume that this is being handled "off-stage" with illusions for the surgeon, the nursing staff, and all others concerned?