by PastMaster
Encore un excellent chapitre, au début j'ai penser que j'allais lire toute une série d'explications à n'en plus finir, mais non. Content que Caleb réussis son test FBI. Il a encore sauvé un petit garçon (plus deux enfermer au sous sol). Il vas finir en super héros, comme pour sa thèse de fin d'étude. J'espère que la demande d'information sur Ness pour la présentatrice tv aux infos ne vas pas ce transformer en chasse aux sorcières.
Heureusement que Meena a su canaliser la colère que ressentait Caleb et a su ressouder la famille, sinon....
This was a particularly good entry. Caleb got a clue! So often, he is so full of himself and the character so irritating, judgemental, unforgiving. It was nice to see him seek help and actually listen and consider in spite of his normal stance of deny, defend, dismiss. It was good to see Arnie showing insight as he integrates with the family as well as Ness using her powers. Will Ness meet with Noah's mom? How will Caleb resolve budding feelings? Good writing PM! Thanks.
Excellent chapter in a _really_ good story. It is good to see Caleb maturing a bit --he needs to reduce the size of the chip on his shoulder, and begin to listen to his family more in order to be a more effective agent.
You have, once again, written a phenomenal chapter in this story!
I look forward to reading anything you write.
Always wonderful . At some point while reading each chapter, I find myself with tears in my eyes. I so enjoy your stories.
After a nice story (with a sledge hammer of foreshadowing, which the author even admits), clubbing it to death with the neighbour throwing herself at Caleb...
Just what have you gotten Caleb into now, first a shooting that is more than justified with no other alternative available and now a neighbor who i sapperantly getting the wrong signals from the empath. Good episode and loooking forward to the next story and good to see some resolution to Calebs uncertainty about the use of deadly force
Congratulations on 100 stories on Literotica. I love how you have grown and flexed as an author.
Thank you for the hours of good mental entertainment
Every time you post something new, it surprises me. This was one of the best "learning" moments you have created for Caleb. The subtle twists and turns as he navigated this new reality were almost perfect. Keep up the amazing work. Like many, I can't wait to see where Caleb's journey takes him next.
Just finished rereading all 79 chapters. Your style and story telling is compelling and entertaining. Thank you so much for sharing your talent and efforts on this site. Please keep It going.
I am simply in awe of the way you find new plot twists to keep an excellent series going -- I always look forward to reading your work and seeing what comes next for Caleb et al!
I really enjoy this story.
However, I have to say, people in Nampa Idaho don't get visits from Boise Police. Boise Police have no jurisdiction there.
So, Nampa Police, or Canyon County Sheriffs are what to be expected in that area. Everyone there hopes never to see or speak to either.
This comment is only for correction of what's stated in chapter 79.
I still enjoyed the chapter.