All Comments on 'Caleb Helps Out'

Oh, me thinks Mama has created a monster! Wonder what Dad will think in a few months? Hopefully they will have to "practice" a bit before she becomes pregnant. Like maybe all summer!

Great fantasy and as always very well told.

Cheers

SAGE

Nice build-up to the story! Hope there's more!

A very fun, enjoyable story. I would love to see some follow up chapters. It is obviously something they are enjoying and became more than just to get her pregnant even if that is how it started. Do they continue after she is pregnant?

Nice, steamy, love the little mix of humor. So glad I found your stories. Hope you write lots more.

Very good! I hope there is another chapter.

Absolutely fucking loved it! Please post a followup chapter detailing what happens after the dad gets home. Five stars and a favorite point!

Well written and so hot. *****

You should continue with a story while she is pregnant and how they still cant resist each other!

I loved this story and hope you continue the story. More of Caleb trying to get his Mom pregnant and then what happens later if or when his dad comes home and after the baby is born. I really hope you will also write more stories like this, they are so hard to find.

Pretty good start. Narrative was generally good but there were some spots where it got a little flat, lot of words without moving the story along. Look forward to the next part - 4*

Awesome work hope there’s more

I cant quite put my finger on just what, exactly, pulls me into this story, but every little bit is great. Good build up, rationale, and peak. If there were ANY criticism, I'd say that it just didn't last quite long enough

You really need to add some more to this story. Does she get pregnant? What do they tell Dad? Do they continue with each other? See....more of the story. Waiting.......

Not. Bad start to this story now all you have to do is finish it

Fantastic story and everything! It didn’t get too weird, and was very wholesome feeling. I only noticed that there is an extra comma in one of the last paragraphs on the third page talking about her labia. Other than that, I didn’t notice anything! 5*

She doesn't appear to feel much, if any remorse for betraying her husband's trust. Then again, neither does the son. In short, nobody to like in this sordid, unoriginal tale.

Nice one, W.! Really intense, Loved it!

Wonderful, hot story. My only question is if one of the anonymous posters doesn’t like these topics, why do they read them?

Really hot story. The mom is super hot. Fantastic writing

GREAT STORY, HOT STUFF! CINCO ESTRELLAS!

Love the story. AAAAAA++++++

Great novel,but maybe too much time spent dwelling on the decision of whether to hump or go the turkey baster route,...- no ?

"Caleb Helps Out:" - Nineteen Year Old Very Virile Son, Caleb and Fertile Late Thirties Married Mother (unnamed).

As with every "swing dick" out there, reading this lusty, wanting-a-baby mother, it's most probably every guys wish to impregnate Caleb's mother themselves--or at the very least, to imagine their own mother's face that Caleb does get his fondest wish.....to fuck his beautiful and youthful mother. She WANTS to be pregnant, but her husband is shooting blanks.

Writer, 'WritingwhatIlike' has written a great story. But, the missing link, at least me me, is there is no romantic love nor foreplay before they do their impregnating dance!! Of course, they do like, care for and respect each other, but the libido producing spark of romance is not there. Even though I "saw" my mother's face on Caleb's mother, I would have no problem of having loved and sexually cherished her.

There is sequel that I'm anxious to feast me eyes upon! Maybe Caleb is going to convince him that they should have at least another child together--after the current one they're now attempting to create!

Second of your stories that I've read and this was almost as good as the first. Another 5 star story

50 billion stars, oh he'll I can only give you five. Guess that will have to do.

5/5 Thanks!

Not sure if both mother and son can just stop fucking each other, can they? If I'm fucking a beautiful woman, even if she is my mother, and the pussy is yummy it would be hard for me just to get her pregnant and go about my life. I'm going to want to continue to fuck that pussy. And maybe give her more beautiful babies.