All Comments on 'California Dreamin'

A nice first story. Very poignant and moving. Looking forward to seeing more from you.

Painful, and very believable. I love happy endings, but know they’re not inevitable. 💔

Thank you.

I don’t think I’ve read a story that evokes so many conflicting emotions as this does.

Well written and thought provoking,

Cant wait for more.

I thought that Diane did something creepy and dishonest.

I like a good short story

Other than that I expected an unhappy ending, I didn’t see that coming. I’ve given my heart to the unworthy, but not quite this unworthy. I only hope she now can move forward truly and find real love.

This is definitely something you wouldn't want happen anytime ...... "If its the truth then it was kimd of abuse in a worst case scenario " ...... That makes my heart ache

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