All Comments on 'California Dreamin Ch. 03'

An interesting way to end your story. A little too much "Deus ex machina" for my tastes, avoiding the inevitable breakup between Richard and Diane. It would have been interesting to see how Barb and Diane worked out their new relationship. Overall a very nice first effort. I look forward to seeing more stories from you.

A good if sad ending.

Shame you finished it this way.

But 5 Stars for a gripping story.