All Comments on 'Caline Ch. 01'

by GreenGeranium

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

Conflicted, this should be hot but instead it feels abusive and sad.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Boring

That had to be the most boring story I have ever read. I honestly tried to enjoy but was yawning to much. To much crap and to little action

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago

Found this really fucking hot. Keep writing please

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Love it!

I felt like it was anything but boring to be honest, and I love your writing style. I would love to hear what happens to Caline after the exam!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Want more

I loved this story, I want to know more about Anders and his slaves, but also more about the doctor

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Great!

Loved 3

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
It definitely provokes a reaction

I had the strongest desire to strap Ander to the same table and carve him into tiny little pieces

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