All Comments on 'Call Me'

Awesome first submission, hoping there is another chapter on the way soon.

Very nice first story. A little short but it moved along quite well. Looking forward to seeing your next story.

Short, sweet and effective. A great first contribution!

Nice story; now if our heroine's can just meet IRL!

I did not comment upon first reading this short piece, then found myself enjoying and commenting on your collaborative stories with SiteNonSite. So after re-reading “Call Me” simply want to applaud the scene you created — certainly a foretaste of your creativity/imagination. You already know how easily I was caught up in “One Bed”, the brief, intensely erotic scene the two of you created. Wonder if you have thought about bringing Sara and Jess together IRL and learning more about them; probably too far fetched and we would likely lose the strength/attraction of this piece. That said, we know their names and a bit about them, so … . Enjoy your writing style and imagination.

Nicely done. I didn’t really start off hard but as the arc progressed so did my erection. Sure it’s short, but that’s not a bad thing. Sometimes coupling is short. Despite the characters being on opposite sides of the planet, you manage to deftly bring them together.

Really well done!

Good story!