All Comments on 'Call Me Jeffrey'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Ending was uncalled for

Decent to start, enjoyed how it was written.

The end was unnecessary.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Too soon

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
OmG 😆

I didn’t even read the story the beginning was way to

Cocky for me but I scrolled to read the comments and the ending 😲 just wow

erectus123erectus123over 4 years agoAuthor
Dear Anon, thanks for you observation. Sure, the end was un-needed

but the question remains--did he hang himself or was he hung to keep his secrets.

Obviously the short story is based on Jeffrey Epstein. May he rest in peace or pieces?

erectus123erectus123over 4 years agoAuthor
6th paragraph typo

many--should be --maybe

erectus123erectus123over 4 years agoAuthor
Jeffry

should be Jeffrey

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
:/

God the main character was so obnoxious. Literally couldn’t enjoy the story.

also fucking trans women doesn’t mean you’re fucking someone that isn’t a woman, trans women are women

erectus123erectus123about 4 years agoAuthor
yes

jeffry was a piece of shit --capishe? Just like the real Jeffry

erectus123erectus123about 4 years agoAuthor
yes

Jeffrey was a piece of shit! just like the real Jeffrey! Capishe?

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