All Comments on 'Call Me Love Ch. 01'

To be frank, I can't think of another œuvre around here that had me so fascinated in terms of character-/ story building, the choice of language style and the positive balance of power between the partners.

Kudos indeed!

Wow. Great story. 5 stars.

Excellent! What a way to generate heat and keep it there across 6 pages. 5 stars.

Fantastic story line and great characters. Your writing is superb but…..the dialogue is so cockney orientated with so much “Eastenders” it nearly didn’t get the fifth star. LoL

You're a much better writer than the vast majority of people on this site, whether or not you got the exact details of some obscure regional dialect (and the weird, entitled need to point it out in public) doesn't factor into the 5/5 I gave you.

It is a well-written epic with a common plot, hook-up details, and the description of a scene that is more than absorbing by its length and emotions.