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chipmonk9chipmonk94 months ago

You blended paranormal and supernatural elements in a way only top writers can do.

redlion75redlion754 months ago

All the jumping around made it hard to follow

Robbb_FangRobbb_Fang4 months ago

A great start. Looking forward to more.

drifternd11drifternd114 months ago

Was hard to follow for a short minute. Then I really started getting into it and now understand the tracking. I do think it is an outstanding start and can’t wait for the next installment. 5*

EldrinCrainerEldrinCrainer4 months ago

I really hope you keep up with this, as a long time reader on this site I can see that you’ve got amazing talent at forming a narrative and I can’t wait to see where it goes

Cuthcavs55Cuthcavs553 months ago

Great first chapter! It was equally intriguing and erotic! I’m really looking forward to more. I know it’s early but im definitely hoping for the harem route with a good ending! Kap and his family (and Natalie) are already east to root for.

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Born in 1981, E.V. has traveled across Europe, America and Asia gaining experiences and using those to craft their stories. E.V. currently resides in the United States writing stories part-time. E.V. posts works for community engagement and feedback on https://patreon.com/EVHayes

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