All Comments on 'Call the Police'

Well, this was a remarkably hot story.

not all your stories hit it out of the ballpark. but, this one did!

Love this! Such a great build up, would love to see a before story of in the club!

How about a prequel describing both girls’ hypnotic experience at the club?

Start a Spinoff where Madeline admires Shay not giving in, and doesn't give her power PERSAY but rather experiences she could only dream of. Possibly with more cops (The uniform touch was perfect) or someone in her life. That way Shay doesn't see her as evil, and possibly Madeline has a partner in crime