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First of all great story! I mostly liked the BTB aspect of resolving the Rain story, but the romance was good (for a romance - just usually not my thing, nothing wrong with your work quality :)
Second, I'm not sure about others, but I'd advise against the asshole "president" story, unless it's a harsh BTB. Because so far, he and his wife ruined several marriages and one man is dead, and they were NOT proportionately punished, not even near enough.
I was a little confused at the beginning as to how it related to the first story but you pulled it together nicely. The ending was abrupt cold of used another half of page but all in a good story. Looking forward the the next chapter. Thanks!
Such an abrupt ending!!!
That slut Priya deserved to be burned more!!
Jane and Dr Love still seem insecure till the very end
Well, aside the incoherent rants by the bellow haters, I thought it was a very well put together, very well written and told Love Story. Thank you! 5 BIG ASS SHINY SPARKLING STARS!
SUCH AN ABRUPT END TO A GREAT STORY.
THOUGH I DID THINK THE CLUELESS DR LOVE AND PRIYA GOT OFF TOO EASILY....JANE SHOULD HAVE MADE DR LOVE SWEAT A BIT MORE....HE WAS GOSSIPING TO PRIYA ABOUT HANE'S SHIFT, WHY COULD HE NOT TELL THIS TO JANE DIRECTLY AND SO MANY LUNCHES AND DRINKS DATES....IS HE REALLY THAT CLULESS....DR LOVE IS NO DIFFERENT FROM HIS FIANCÉ WHO CHEATED ON HIM....SO THE STORY WOULD HAVE BEEN BETTER IF JANE MADE HIM SWEAT MORE!!!