All Comments on 'Callsign Amarok Ch. 01'

This is third time I've seen this posted. When do we get the rest.

When do we get to read the next installation. I’ve read this one, submitted at least three times

So quit messing with the first chapter and continue the story!!

Apologies for all the reposts. This will be the last recurrence of deleting and re-publishing works. Chapter 2 is in progress and I will update you all through Author's profile.

Thank you for your patience and time.

As well as those of you who have supported and followed this series these past months. Just know that your support drives me to write. My heartfelt appreciation cannot be expressed through any actions other than the quality of my work.

I wish everyone a great year!

I liked it the first time ! It just got better 5*'s again !

Thanks for the read waiting for more !

txcracker

To obsess over perfect action is to take no action at all - we’re human (or werewolf), and typo’s will be a part of our life! Don’t stress over the small things. You have a gem of a start, interesting characters, world building and the beginnings of an intriguing alternate-world plot that I’d love to see more of! While you can never rush an author, I do hope to see another instalment soon.

Cheers,

Guenhwyvar

Keep it up and more please great story

So far, so good. However, you made a slight mistake. Where you said a 16-man Squadron it should have been a 16-man squad. A Squadron (Battalion) is somewhere around 100 300 personnel. I'm a retired E-6 (Army Staff Sergeant, Air Force Tech Sergeant.) I got my 6s as an Armored Cavalry Section Sergeant, I led approximately 16 men: 4 Scout vehicles (M113 APC) with 4 personnel: Driver, 2 scouts, and the Track Commander (either an e-6 or E-5).