All Comments on 'Calm Ch. 02'

This is so sad it makes you hurt. How are you going to make this sadness go away and given how bad it is let the reader feel any better.

I know it's sad, anon. This is the story how it revealed itself to me. Ellie fighting with her past. Ruth and Tom allowing her into their lives, while still living a fulfilling life of their own. All of them towards the future.

It's a story filled with a difficult struggle. Keep reading if you want to see them work through everything that's thrown at them. I like to think that even though it has sadness, my story also has some of what makes people beautiful in it.

You and all the other readers will be the judge of that.

Liked the story. Really like the background of the characters. Some really hot sex scenes.